tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post5892347899940938916..comments2023-11-29T18:26:07.178+00:00Comments on Dream Genie..: Monday Poetry Train Revisited #28Andy Sewinahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14765633868539628820noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-17001835817680583372009-05-20T01:19:34.819+01:002009-05-20T01:19:34.819+01:00Hi Pretty You!! Don't you just love cucumber? Osca...Hi Pretty You!! Don't you just love cucumber? Oscar Wilde wrote about cucumber sandwiches 120 years ago!Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14765633868539628820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-27764098553536851122009-05-19T16:08:00.000+01:002009-05-19T16:08:00.000+01:00i love ur Sandwiches !! and this time u added cucu...i love ur Sandwiches !! and this time u added cucumbers too ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-55155148669445231072009-05-19T10:20:00.000+01:002009-05-19T10:20:00.000+01:00Hi Jeeves, you're cool too!Hi Jeeves, you're cool too!andyhttp://properjoes.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-16915172064767170912009-05-19T10:19:00.000+01:002009-05-19T10:19:00.000+01:00Hi Linda, It's wonderful in the poetry garden, I l...Hi Linda, It's wonderful in the poetry garden, I like the wild flowers best, especially the ones that everybody else thinks are just weeds.andyhttp://properjoes.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-13984059356680321642009-05-19T05:51:00.000+01:002009-05-19T05:51:00.000+01:00cool, coolcool, coolJeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-25217856578025576332009-05-19T01:16:00.000+01:002009-05-19T01:16:00.000+01:00I love the idea of a poetry garden!I love the idea of a poetry garden!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-18721807875773904792009-05-18T15:40:00.000+01:002009-05-18T15:40:00.000+01:00Thanks Julia, I think the narrator has been unluck...Thanks Julia, I think the narrator has been unlucky in love before.<br /><br />Glad you liked the round vs wrong number.Andy Sewinahttp://properjoes.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-35483701281884244502009-05-18T15:34:00.000+01:002009-05-18T15:34:00.000+01:00Hi Tony, I liked you club sandwich!
Hi Gautami, t...Hi Tony, I liked you club sandwich!<br /><br />Hi Gautami, thank god for the poetry garden.<br /><br />Thanks Utopianfragments, glad you spotted them.Andy Sewinahttp://properjoes.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-17748488761063477972009-05-18T15:33:00.000+01:002009-05-18T15:33:00.000+01:00This is nice:
'I hang out in the poetry garden, a...This is nice:<br /><br />'I hang out in the poetry garden, alone with my thoughts once again.'<br /><br />Even though the narrator would rather be with a special someone.<br /><br />And I like this one, too:<br /><br />'noughty as a round number<br />naughty as a wrong number'Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-88133957010924753792009-05-18T11:44:00.000+01:002009-05-18T11:44:00.000+01:00this was nice one, i liked those little changes be...this was nice one, i liked those little changes between the simliar lines.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-7375134599014440242009-05-18T10:31:00.000+01:002009-05-18T10:31:00.000+01:00That poetry garden offers love and peace, does it ...That poetry garden offers love and peace, does it not?<br /><br />Cool as cucumber...<br /><br /><A HREF="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/05/two-hearts.html" REL="nofollow">two hearts</A>gautami tripathyhttp://firmlyrooted.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-1171574083564121892009-05-18T09:16:00.000+01:002009-05-18T09:16:00.000+01:00Liked both of these. I've been experimenting with ...Liked both of these. I've been experimenting with these forms today. Not sure whether it works though.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-8572213344881427902009-05-18T08:17:00.000+01:002009-05-18T08:17:00.000+01:00Thanks Lluvia!Thanks Lluvia!Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14765633868539628820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-53135701191324930332009-05-18T03:57:00.000+01:002009-05-18T03:57:00.000+01:00Cool (as a cucumber) poem!Cool (as a cucumber) poem!Lluviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15372624951209457246noreply@blogger.com