tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post6800768893853659878..comments2023-11-29T18:26:07.178+00:00Comments on Dream Genie..: Carry On Tuesday #36Andy Sewinahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14765633868539628820noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-48161145545825398112010-01-19T14:39:35.308+00:002010-01-19T14:39:35.308+00:00it's is like a song and I especially like the ...it's is like a song and I especially like the lines - You are my lyric and my tune - wonderful hypnoticlissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11012085842881252635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-33131563301594616072010-01-19T04:54:18.567+00:002010-01-19T04:54:18.567+00:00Nicely done even if it was a couple three years ag...Nicely done even if it was a couple three years ago today is my first time I read it it's nicely done anyway.<br /><br><br /><a href="http://moonsdesignslive.blogspot.com/2010/01/brenda-sister-younger-than-i-found.html" rel="nofollow">For My Wife</a><br /><br>Larryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06086755362215081746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-56416836641095410852010-01-19T03:04:43.893+00:002010-01-19T03:04:43.893+00:00this seems very much like a song lyric, very sweet...this seems very much like a song lyric, very sweetAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-39083262899845406492010-01-19T01:55:26.823+00:002010-01-19T01:55:26.823+00:00Thank YOu for coming by, i could discover you.
Lo...Thank YOu for coming by, i could discover you.<br /><br />Loved this one but my fav fav lines are <br />"You are my sun you are my moon<br /><br />You are my lyric and my tune<br /><br />You are my midnight and my noon<br /><br />So please please come back someday soon"<br /><br />I almost wished i had written this, beautiful Andy. Have a great day!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-451178278941972482010-01-19T00:02:56.823+00:002010-01-19T00:02:56.823+00:00Awwww..sweet. I really like the repetitions,
and...Awwww..sweet. I really like the repetitions, <br /><br />and that line,<br /><br />Miss you need you want you love you<br />Don't you know that I love you too?<br /><br />Thanks for visiting me too.<br /><br />-IreneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-63715439407051552282010-01-18T21:43:23.327+00:002010-01-18T21:43:23.327+00:00I didn't know you cared...
Seriously though, t...I didn't know you cared...<br />Seriously though, this is a great sentiment.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-65327833610848752802010-01-18T20:50:39.826+00:002010-01-18T20:50:39.826+00:00Very nice. Good rhyming. I think these lines came ...Very nice. Good rhyming. I think these lines came from your heart.Arielhttp://www.mywritings-ariel.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-25177650700401773322010-01-18T19:24:48.051+00:002010-01-18T19:24:48.051+00:00Lovely and sad together. Thank you for this.Lovely and sad together. Thank you for this.Yousei Himehttp://tasmith1122.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-74415880769801828152010-01-18T17:17:43.426+00:002010-01-18T17:17:43.426+00:00Andy, what a lovely love poem. I love your use of ...Andy, what a lovely love poem. I love your use of repetition and your images are beautiful. You nailed it.<br />I too love your work. Well done<br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-11628260972688102222010-01-18T16:19:12.238+00:002010-01-18T16:19:12.238+00:00Same as Rinkly Rimes - 'You are my lyric and m...Same as Rinkly Rimes - 'You are my lyric and my tune' - stood out for me.Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-7474819464721114182010-01-18T11:07:47.203+00:002010-01-18T11:07:47.203+00:00I like 'You are my lyric and my tune'. Nic...I like 'You are my lyric and my tune'. Nice.Rinkly Rimeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-50694372441399075512010-01-18T03:03:01.674+00:002010-01-18T03:03:01.674+00:00A very beautiful poem, Andy. I enjoyed your blog.A very beautiful poem, Andy. I enjoyed your blog.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.com