tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post3786366205546310876..comments2023-11-29T18:26:07.178+00:00Comments on Dream Genie..: BalderdasheryAndy Sewinahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14765633868539628820noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-86556304608850903272009-04-08T10:37:00.000+01:002009-04-08T10:37:00.000+01:00hi andy,please trust me when i say that there was/...hi andy,<BR/>please trust me when i say that there was/is no motive to try and belittle ur work in that cmnt.i breed no intentions to diminish anyone,leave aside poets.<BR/><BR/>the cmnt is a simple acknowledgement that i see u as being qualified to write so much better!<BR/><BR/>[perhaps there is a case of a well known artist having said that he made that one painting in (40 years) & a few minutes!/obviuosly one values the sweat n toil behind every work]<BR/><BR/>best wishes andy..zoya gautamhttp://vci2i.blogspot.com/2009/04/sipping-hemlock.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-39735688401718232532009-04-08T08:20:00.000+01:002009-04-08T08:20:00.000+01:00Hi Zoya, there are no short cuts, you're right of ...Hi Zoya, there are no short cuts, you're right of course, it only took me one minute to write (and thirty years of experience)...<BR/>Consider this:<BR/>You plant five seeds and wait for them to grow/ After many many years of toil/ The tree begins to bear a little fruit/ You take the first apple from the tree/ The fruit tastes oh so sweet, so good to eat/ Every season there's a little more fruit/ you slice the apples to make a pie/ You crush and squeeze them to make a drink/ And after many more years - one day/ You cut the apple the other way/ Then for the first time you see the Five points/ Pentagram, One Star, Points five, perhaps not.Andy Sewinahttp://properjoes.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35462930.post-86260335769138061242009-04-08T00:51:00.000+01:002009-04-08T00:51:00.000+01:00..this might sound like criticism andy but it seem.....this might sound like criticism andy but it seems like u've been lazy here and taken a short-cut_<BR/><BR/>but what about .."i unravel time"<BR/><BR/>did u not write that-that sounds good..zoya gautamhttp://vci2i.blogspot.com/2009/04/sipping-hemlock.htmlnoreply@blogger.com