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Tuesday, December 22, 2009

Just When You Thought It Was Safe....

First of all I must apologise to all of you, for not posting anything for so long. However, now that I'm back, I'm going to post a couple of things. The first one, which I will post right now, should give you an idea of where I'm at.
I've got a diagnostic army in my head
feels like soldiers made of plastic, tin and lead.
They are marching up and down to find my brain
and a chemical brigade invades my vein.
Ack-ack-ack, Ack-ack-attack! I'm fighting back!

Of course, when the diagnosis didn't work
they sent for the Neuro-Surgeon Doctor Burke.
Who wanted to drill a hole into my head
It's a simple operation, so he said.
Ack-ack-ack, Ack-ack-attack! I'm fighting back!

So I took my head to see another Quack
all he did was stick a needle in my back.
But hey, even if and when, they find my brain
I'll hide my mind, my soul, my memory lane.
Ack-ack-ack, Ack-ack- attack! I'm fighting back!

Next time they're going to scan me, front and back
but please, don't send me to that Quack 'Flat-tyre Jack!'
Ack-ack-ack, Ack-ack-attack! I won't come back!
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  1. Ouch. This seems painful. Please take care

  2. Darn! Not fun!

    "even if and when, they find my brain
    I'll hide my mind, my soul, my memory lane."

    Cool line!

    Hang in there!

  3. Keep fighting - but put it on ice for Christmas (must be plemnty about right now?). I hope this thing works its way out.
    All the best.

  4. Brim over I agree but I think the brief should have more info then it has.

  5. Again a fair post. Thank your achates