The words this week are:
Brash, Lubricate, and Saint.
Here's Mine:
In the NaiSaiKu style
Blue's bait train crash
might be an anagram of
BRASH LUBRICATE SAINT
which is an anagram of
Al nets Rabbi's haircut
14042+10/1
And here's a little story
using the three words
and some of the anagrams:
LAST THOUGHT
It was the first time the brash Al had borrowed the Rabbi's hand built bike. The seat needed adjusting and one brake block was missing. But big Al was in a rush to get his hair cut. Shirley had promised to lubricate the chain later. 'What a saint' thought Al, just before the fatal crash.
And as submitted to The American Sandwich game..
LAST THOUGHT 2
'What a saint' thought Al, skidding to a halt, just before the fatal crash.
And as submitted to The American Sandwich game..
LAST THOUGHT 2
The Rabbi's bike was in need of repair, when the brash big Al rode it.
Shirley promised to lubricate the chain after Al had his haircut.'What a saint' thought Al, skidding to a halt, just before the fatal crash.
Quite a chain of events in the story. I like it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Tony, sorry I've not been around so much lately, I've had less time and more things to do.
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done on all counts. Really liked the story.
ReplyDeleteThanks Thom, I tried to give you something extra this week!
ReplyDeleteLOL. Loved the very short story along with the poem. Brash people always bring a smile to my face!
ReplyDeleteIt fits somehow---the guy too brash to wait on or care about the details that serve to derail him.
ReplyDeleteGreat bike - you went to town on it today!
ReplyDeleteHaste makes waste. I guess brash makes crash. That was a fun read!
ReplyDeletehe had his hair cut after all, unfortunate he wasn't around to see the effect.. good chain of events!
ReplyDeletebreathtaking Naisaiku...in a way, because of the turn of events!
ReplyDeletenice, nice Andy!
Mine, now up, too!
The little story was nicely done, but fatal accident? And I thought I wrote cynical stuff!
ReplyDeletea fatal crash AND the rabbi's handbuilt bike is gone?? great little story and poem :)
ReplyDeleteWowie! Great job with the words, in both the story and the poem. :)
ReplyDeletehumor covers everything... enjoyed the format this week and the how you used the 3ww words...i had to laugh with brash al, the rabbi and his bike... thanks for stoppin by my blogg and the best to you too with napowrimo... it's stretchin the limits of my mind...
ReplyDeleteExcellent Job Andy!!
ReplyDeleteThank you for this fine contribution.
I hope you found this fun and challenging.
Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
Good idea... Next time I need a haircut, I'll borrow the monk's bike. Hope I make it...
ReplyDeletewow. talk about a collision waiting to happen...lol. note to self check before borrowing bike. nice 55.
ReplyDeletemy 55 is up!
Oh dear...
ReplyDeleteWONDERFUL 55 though!
Mine is here
Just like Big Al, I was awe struck...
ReplyDeleteExcellent...a picture you painted in such a vivid 55.
ReplyDeleteLoved your 55.
Sunrise in the City ---as always, scroll down below my Show n Tell. Hope you're having a terrific Friday!!!
That's we we invented the car! Late for me, this week, what with work demanding I do what I'm paid to do. I mean, what a cheek. My 55 story here
ReplyDeleteWho needs all their brake pads? Stopping is overrated. My 55 iss HERE .
ReplyDeleteThe bike is all or nothing -in this case...
ReplyDeleteThe poem and story - everything
thanks for the 55 enjoyment
cheers
Moondustwriter
If Brash Al only knew!
ReplyDeletevery clever, you have such a way with words!! i have never been able to do a haiku, let alone understand it, you have a great gift of words here great 55
ReplyDeleteVery clever. You have a real way with wordplay.
ReplyDeleteMy 55 is up here.
wow who would have thought it would end that way.. great
ReplyDeleteI know it is late but my 55 is up
The last made me laugh out loud. All were good
ReplyDeleteMy favorite version is Last Thought 2. So twisty in just a short time.
ReplyDeletevivid in all prompts :)
ReplyDeletewonderful and dif