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Wednesday, September 07, 2011

Three Word Wednesday CCLVII

Written for and posted to 3WW
The words this week are:
Erode, Heart, and Observe.

Here's mine:
MY HEART + HERS
We observe the rocks
My heart + hers beat as one
Slowly they erode
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20 comments:

  1. Linda Jacobs7 Sept 2011, 12:49:00

    Darn! Sad.

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  2. Daydreamertoo7 Sept 2011, 17:09:00

    Awwwww... I agree with Linda, its sad.

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  3. gautami tripathy7 Sept 2011, 17:33:00

    Unimaginable bliss before they erode...

    hitching a ride in rusted trails

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  4. Andy Sewina7 Sept 2011, 17:47:00

    Thanks Gautami, you're tuned into my heartbeat, as ever!

    <3

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  5. Nanka7 Sept 2011, 18:59:00

    The heartbeat of sweet nothings!! ...and then they erode sad!!

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  6. Maude Lynn7 Sept 2011, 19:05:00

    Incredibly romantic!

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  7. laurie kolp7 Sept 2011, 20:03:00

    Beautiful, Andy.

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  8. Janet Lingel Aldrich7 Sept 2011, 20:48:00

    Erosion is a natural process of time. I like the idea that they stay together long enough for time to take its course.

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  9. Cynthia8 Sept 2011, 00:31:00

    Love conquers even the hardest surface.

    Excellent thought and economy, Andy.

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  10. Old Egg8 Sept 2011, 07:06:00

    We witness the slow demise of the rocks but never believe our love is far less durable. Beautiful piece.

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  11. Springcycle8 Sept 2011, 10:17:00

    Nice poem!

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  12. Jae Rose8 Sept 2011, 17:09:00

    Love conquers even stone..I imagine them hand in hand on a cliff top..but it's all good..Jae ;)

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  13. jennifer9 Sept 2011, 02:56:00

    I enjoy your piece. Simple yet powerful. Very nice.

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  14. Berowne9 Sept 2011, 14:06:00

    Clever, and meaningful, use of the 3 words...

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  15. Anonymous10 Sept 2011, 03:17:00

    lovely Haiku, a treat to read!

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  16. Lisa11 Sept 2011, 04:03:00

    I love the visual that your create.

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  17. keiths ramblings12 Sept 2011, 00:31:00

    Sad, moving, poignat but above all, delightful.

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  18. Madeleine Begun Kane13 Sept 2011, 07:44:00

    Good haiku!

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  19. Anonymous13 Sept 2011, 23:26:00

    Good one Andy!

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  20. Springcycle14 Sept 2011, 14:39:00

    An aside, I went and read your sestina on your profile. I had not heard of this form before and went and looked it up. Very clever and very amusing, not an easy thing to write.

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