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Wednesday, September 07, 2011

Three Word Wednesday CCLVII

Written for and posted to 3WW
The words this week are:
Erode, Heart, and Observe.

Here's mine:
MY HEART + HERS
We observe the rocks
My heart + hers beat as one
Slowly they erode
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20 comments:

  1. Awwwww... I agree with Linda, its sad.

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  2. Thanks Gautami, you're tuned into my heartbeat, as ever!

    <3

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  3. The heartbeat of sweet nothings!! ...and then they erode sad!!

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  4. Erosion is a natural process of time. I like the idea that they stay together long enough for time to take its course.

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  5. Love conquers even the hardest surface.

    Excellent thought and economy, Andy.

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  6. We witness the slow demise of the rocks but never believe our love is far less durable. Beautiful piece.

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  7. Love conquers even stone..I imagine them hand in hand on a cliff top..but it's all good..Jae ;)

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  8. I enjoy your piece. Simple yet powerful. Very nice.

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  9. Clever, and meaningful, use of the 3 words...

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  10. I love the visual that your create.

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  11. Sad, moving, poignat but above all, delightful.

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  12. An aside, I went and read your sestina on your profile. I had not heard of this form before and went and looked it up. Very clever and very amusing, not an easy thing to write.

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