The words this week are:
Admire, Follow, and Piece.
Here's mine:
HIM
It's a piece of cake
To admire and follow him
To crucify him...
12102011
It's a piece of cake
To admire and follow him
TO CRUCIFY HIM
To admire and follow him
It's a piece of cake...
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HELL IN GOTHAM CITY
Dawn and her pet robot said, they would follow, Dave in the Batmobile.
It was a piece of cake till they reached Gotham, and then the fun began.
Catwoman pretended to admire the cult car, and all hell broke loose.
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FlameThrowerPoetry..
ABRAHAM HEIGHTS
They're walking in the double decker air
Hair down by their sides, blowing in the wind
Winding to the top of the narrow stairs
Stares from the crowd below who were amazed
Amazing but much too hard to follow
Follow them to the sky if you can fly
Fly me to the moon, pieces of eight tunes
Tuned into the radio, on and on...
And on they go, up and down the stairwell
Stairway to the skies above, walk on love
Love to admire the view from up on high
Higher than all the heights of Abraham
Abraham Lincoln and all Istanbul
Islington, London town all Abraham
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ABRAHAM HEIGHTS (REVEALED)
Hair down by their sides blowing in the wind
And on they go, up and down the stairwell
Tuned into the radio, on and on...
Winding to the top of the narrow stairs
Abraham Lincoln and all Istanbul
Stares from the crowd below who were amazed
Higher than all the heights of Abraham
Amazing but much too hard to follow
Love to admire the view from up on high
Follow them to the sky if you can fly
Fly me to the moon, pieces of eight tunes
Islington, London town all Abraham
Stairway to the skies above, walk on love
They're walking in the double decker air
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Yes, whatever 'him' means to any of us..I love the word play in first to pieces..really hammered the nails in..Jae
ReplyDeleteThe fate of kings and princes were nailed here, and overnight they became commoners, who could stand for elections!!
ReplyDeleteVery well done ... had to look up NaiSaiku! :o)
ReplyDeletethis is great wordplay.
ReplyDeletefun verses,
ReplyDeletelovely message.
Clever indeed!
ReplyDeleteEvery variation thereupon. Enjoyed them all.
ReplyDeleteSharp and to the point.
ReplyDeleteGreat use of three words. I hope you'll check out my attempt.
Cleeeeever! Well done, admirable work.
ReplyDeleteIt seems that a couple of us have been flying to the moon this week...just make sure your parachute is in order when you take the fall:)
ReplyDeleteyour poem 'its a piece of cake' is quite deep
ReplyDeleteactually.
Great message within the word play
ReplyDeleteYour 3WW is amazing.
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