The words this week are:
Eject, Impact, and Render.
Here's mine:
Poetic Flash Fiction in 51 Syllables
Clink~Da~Link
HOUSE FOR SALE
Letting Dawn's pet robot drive the Batmobile had been a bad idea.Dave had repainted the cement render in order to sell the house.
Pressing the eject button was not the impact they wanted to make.
05102011
It did make the desired impact!! Nice one!! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Nanka, have you visited my Haiku Wall yet?
ReplyDeleteThat might be entirely too much impact! Great use of 3 words.
ReplyDeleteImpacted!!
ReplyDeleteBTW, I am going to do both, American Sandwich and NaiSaiKu this week..
jumpstart
Hi Alice, I enjoyed reading your ongoing story again this week, and will hopefully find out what happens next time.
ReplyDeleteMany thanks for visiting Proper Joe's.
Hi Gautami, can't wait to read your response!
ReplyDeleteI know you'll make an impact!
<3
Who in their right mind would ever give their Batmobile to someone? :)
ReplyDeletecool one, well done.
ReplyDeletelove your blog,
come join our poetry picnic week 9 today,
first time participants can share 1 to 3 random poems.
Old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are welcome.
Hope to see you in.
Best!
xoxox