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Wednesday, July 08, 2009

Three Word Wednesday CXLV

Written for 3WW
the words this week are:
Gloom, Kneel, and Transparent.

Here's mine:

I kneel in the road, transparent as a squashed frog in the morning gloom.

JUST A GAME
Even though Gloom is just a game, rabid flesh eating mice can still bite. He played another transparent card, hoping that this would be the end. I'll know I've won, when I see her kneel at her wedding, he tells himself.
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Transparent pollen
Gloom smells worse than rotten eggs
kneel down Pokemon
POCKET MONSTER ANIME
Kneel down Pokemon
Gloom smells worse than rotten eggs
transparent pollen
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24 comments:

  1. Stan Ski8 Jul 2009, 11:38:00

    Great stuff - I don't know how you come up with so much so quickly.

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  2. Stan Ski8 Jul 2009, 11:38:00

    Great stuff - I don't know how you come up with so much so quickly.

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  3. Gemma Wiseman8 Jul 2009, 11:57:00

    The thread of gloom wanders enigmatically through all these poetic outbursts! Exciting, dramatic expression!

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  4. Sherri B.8 Jul 2009, 13:39:00

    Very clever...the first one certainly made its point very visually! :~)

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  5. Janet Jarrell8 Jul 2009, 14:18:00

    Sexy, dark and dangerous at times...

    Fun to read.

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  6. anthonynorth8 Jul 2009, 14:39:00

    Loved these, but the first was an absolute gem.

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  7. Anonymous8 Jul 2009, 15:16:00

    These are great. Any mentioning of Pokemon reminds me of when Eric Stuart included a subliminal message: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lQppQcM4kJc

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  8. Thom Gabrukiewicz8 Jul 2009, 15:59:00

    You can feel the gloom through each. Good stuff.

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  9. Amy8 Jul 2009, 16:16:00

    Gruesome. Rotten eggs? Ack! Remind me not to play games with you!

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  10. gautami tripathy8 Jul 2009, 17:26:00

    Hmm. I do like gloomy posts!

    a day in a child's life

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  11. jack sender8 Jul 2009, 18:43:00

    i want to know what happened to the frog?

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  12. Linda Jacobs8 Jul 2009, 18:46:00

    I love the gloom smelling like rotten eggs!

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  13. Kristy Worden8 Jul 2009, 19:20:00

    Ick! squashed frog - see that almost everyday... good work

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  14. sarah9 Jul 2009, 05:15:00

    such vibrant writing.

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  15. Tumblewords:9 Jul 2009, 05:26:00

    maybe it's a frog that smells like rotten eggs, but maybe not. How strange - I used pollen as well. Must be something in the air! :)
    Fun read!

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  16. Lost Mermaid9 Jul 2009, 06:11:00

    well you are just amazing every time !! Pokemon reminded me of watching the cartoon with my brother daily !!

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  17. Anonymous9 Jul 2009, 10:19:00

    Very dark.

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  18. Jeeves9 Jul 2009, 10:26:00

    Very nice one...Really like the first one.

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  19. angie9 Jul 2009, 17:05:00

    haha..oh, my!

    fantastic! and squashed frogs--transparently delicious.

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  20. PJD9 Jul 2009, 22:32:00

    These are all amusing. I love the game one (kneel at the wedding).

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  21. Beek11 Jul 2009, 02:58:00

    I liked the first poem because of how you used the words to create a more visual image.

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  22. Leo11 Jul 2009, 15:23:00

    the single sentence was the best! straight and to the point! :)

    the naisaku was good too...

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  23. angie11 Jul 2009, 18:49:00

    and I must tell you--I've given you an award over at my blog. Do come see:

    http://therer2doors.wordpress.com/2009/07/11/i-really-want-to-be-the-queen/

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  24. Jane Doe14 Jul 2009, 23:41:00

    These are amazing. Your imagery and descriptions are so animated and dynamic. Wonderful!

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