Dream Genie..: Tuesday Challenge!!

Tuesday, July 21, 2009

Tuesday Challenge!!

Like a bomb ticking, like a heart beating, time is about to erupt.

Like a heart beating
time is about to erupt
Like a bomb ticking

Like a heart beating
Time is about to erupt
LIKE A BOMB TICKING
About to erupt, time is
like a heart beating
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8 comments:

Thom Gabrukiewicz21 Jul 2009, 13:11:00
Great stuff, Andy.
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Janet Jarrell21 Jul 2009, 16:23:00
It sounds like Love is ticking - ready to erupt - be still my beating...
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gautami tripathy21 Jul 2009, 17:10:00
Erupted andy!

readingless days
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Stan Ski21 Jul 2009, 23:48:00
It may be just the alarm clock!
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Jeeves22 Jul 2009, 14:06:00
Very nice one
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Tumblewords:23 Jul 2009, 18:46:00
Perfectly perfect - this one feels...
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Megha24 Jul 2009, 16:46:00
Very nice :)
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zoya gautam25 Jul 2009, 20:00:00
Erupted andy!

i'll buy u a candy

( when i have the money ie )
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