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Sunday, February 21, 2010

Haiku Bones: Fraught

Written for Haiku Bones: Fraught (prompt)
and posted to The NaiSaiKu Challenge?

Bones:

Danger fraught
shifting snow drifting
white out white
21022+10

NaiSaiKu:

Fraught danger
shifting snow drifting
WHITE OUT WHITE
drifting snow shifting
danger fraught
21022+10/1

It's never too late to take The NaiSaiKu Challenge?

9 comments:

  1. It's going to be a long, cold winter.

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  2. Hey Andy, that is neat. Of course you had to be thinking of both forms in your compostion process.
    I didn't think there would be snow in Manchester. We hardly ever get any here in Southeast Texas.
    ..
    Thanks for the new to me term, 'sea shanty.' If I can remember it I will ask my son, he is a boatman for the Houston, Texas, Ship Channel.
    ..

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  3. Hi Jim, you're right we don't get much snow in Manchester, but we have had a bit this year, and there's a little in the air now, but it's rare for it to stick.

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  4. Ah, I like the flow of these! Nice!!

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  5. True danger, I would worry, too.

    I have been bragging about out nice weather here in Maine, USA-just looked out, it is snowing again.

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  6. Here in Bakersfield I have forgotten what it is like to live in snow. My daughter is going to college at Smith next year, so I will become reacquainted shortly. YAY!

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