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Wednesday, May 27, 2009

Carry On Tuesday #2 & Totally Optional Prompts

Written for Carry On Tuesday #2
prompted at and posted to Totally Optional Prompts


DER DER DERLANG
everyone suddenly burst out singing
and I was filled with such delight,
oh yeah, oh what
a joyful song,
it was to bring
to the table,
who would have dreamed to dare it was only
last night that I saw you in my sleep,
walking towards me naked
I heard your scream,
I felt your nightmare too
I relived your dream, yeah
and yet, now here you are,
as bold as brass
and uplifting everyone
who knows you
with this new song
der
der
derlang
der der
der der
derlang
you sang, and I was filled with the new light
my cup is overflowing now, with glee
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11 comments:

  1. oh, yes, andy

    hats off and cheers.

    you have created an entire scene in only a few words.

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  2. Great narrative song. Uplifting!

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  3. This is so joyful! I Love it.

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  4. Now that's quite a song Good one

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  5. Definitely an uplifting song :-)
    Excellent.

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  6. I agree with everyone...uplifting!

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  7. I like your take on this prompt very nicely done.

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  8. Makes me want to get up and dance!

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