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Friday, May 29, 2009

Sunday Scribblings - Covert

Written for the Sunday Scribblings prompt: Covert


COVERT FRIEND OF MINE

Sandy eye candy, she’s virtually mine

She’s cool as can be I met her Online

Sandy eye candy covert friend of mine

She writes the rhythm and I do the rhyme

Sandy eye candy, her words taste like wine

Urdu or Haiku her language sublime

Sandy eye candy we chat all the time

She knows I love her, I think she’s divine

Sandy eye candy when will she be mine

She reads my letters, one line at a time

Sandy eye candy, is love such a crime

Each time I 'see' her, she makes me feel fine

Sandy eye candy, I met her Online

She’s cool as can be she’s virtually mine!

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20 comments:

  1. Dee Martin30 May 2009, 00:44:00

    this was lots of fun :)

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  2. Lucy30 May 2009, 01:55:00

    ooh la la! I love the repeat of 'sandy eye candy' very musical!

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  3. anthonynorth30 May 2009, 09:03:00

    This is catchy and fun. Loved it.

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  4. paisley30 May 2009, 12:57:00

    i agree that it sounds like a song... very clever....

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  5. Dorinny30 May 2009, 16:58:00

    such a great use of rhyme and repetition. i love the circular flow of this. cute too :)

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  6. Anonymous31 May 2009, 00:26:00

    great style! "She writes the rhythm and I do the rhyme" is my favorite line! -Meg

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  7. Tumblewords:31 May 2009, 01:25:00

    Sandy eye candy - a lyrical love...

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  8. Frances31 May 2009, 02:41:00

    I wish my own post were that creative.
    Super fun to read.
    sandy eye candy - lol I love it.

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  9. linda may31 May 2009, 03:59:00

    I enjoyed this Andy. Fun and light hearted.

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  10. The lady in Red31 May 2009, 04:48:00

    Dear Andy, very creative blog and incredible post with words and sonority! Congratulations!
    Best wishes,
    Rosana

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  11. Dave King31 May 2009, 11:13:00

    Loved the rhyme. Really "took" me.

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  12. Anonymous31 May 2009, 16:50:00

    This poem begs to be set to music. Perhaps you can serenade your love with an mp3 someday!

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  13. keiths ramblings31 May 2009, 20:16:00

    This is just great. Such fun!

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  14. Rosey31 May 2009, 20:20:00

    So, Sandy is Andy's eye candy. Randy Andy!!!

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  15. Thom Gabrukiewicz31 May 2009, 21:09:00

    I agree with Tumblewords, this would make a great song. Nicely done, Andy.

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  16. Jennifer Hicks1 Jun 2009, 04:56:00

    this is so provocative!
    well done!

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  17. Jeeves1 Jun 2009, 06:05:00

    Love this one. Online fun.

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  18. gautami tripathy1 Jun 2009, 09:18:00

    Virtually mine..online!

    LOL!

    I dream in brown

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  19. Anonymous1 Jun 2009, 20:12:00

    nice post .. plz visit here :

    http://ofsomethingsomething.blogspot.com/2009/06/my-angels-posted-both-my-blogs.html

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  20. Anonymous2 Jun 2009, 10:35:00

    Wow this is so nice..loved it.

    http://songofsea.wordpress.com/2009/05/24/cupid-strikes/

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