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Friday, May 29, 2009

Sunday Scribblings - Covert

Written for the Sunday Scribblings prompt: Covert


COVERT FRIEND OF MINE

Sandy eye candy, she’s virtually mine

She’s cool as can be I met her Online

Sandy eye candy covert friend of mine

She writes the rhythm and I do the rhyme

Sandy eye candy, her words taste like wine

Urdu or Haiku her language sublime

Sandy eye candy we chat all the time

She knows I love her, I think she’s divine

Sandy eye candy when will she be mine

She reads my letters, one line at a time

Sandy eye candy, is love such a crime

Each time I 'see' her, she makes me feel fine

Sandy eye candy, I met her Online

She’s cool as can be she’s virtually mine!

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20 comments:

  1. ooh la la! I love the repeat of 'sandy eye candy' very musical!

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  2. This is catchy and fun. Loved it.

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  3. i agree that it sounds like a song... very clever....

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  4. such a great use of rhyme and repetition. i love the circular flow of this. cute too :)

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  5. great style! "She writes the rhythm and I do the rhyme" is my favorite line! -Meg

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  6. Sandy eye candy - a lyrical love...

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  7. I wish my own post were that creative.
    Super fun to read.
    sandy eye candy - lol I love it.

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  8. I enjoyed this Andy. Fun and light hearted.

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  9. Dear Andy, very creative blog and incredible post with words and sonority! Congratulations!
    Best wishes,
    Rosana

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  10. Loved the rhyme. Really "took" me.

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  11. This poem begs to be set to music. Perhaps you can serenade your love with an mp3 someday!

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  12. So, Sandy is Andy's eye candy. Randy Andy!!!

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  13. I agree with Tumblewords, this would make a great song. Nicely done, Andy.

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  14. this is so provocative!
    well done!

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  15. Love this one. Online fun.

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  16. nice post .. plz visit here :

    http://ofsomethingsomething.blogspot.com/2009/06/my-angels-posted-both-my-blogs.html

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  17. Wow this is so nice..loved it.

    http://songofsea.wordpress.com/2009/05/24/cupid-strikes/

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