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Wednesday, May 27, 2009

Your Future Looks Bleak..

Written for 3WW the words this week are:
timid, dreary and embrace
Posted to MondayPoetryTrainRevisited
and The NaisaiKu Challenge?

Here's mines:

timid looks
handshake no embrace
dreary you

timid looks
handshake no embrace
dreary you
YOUR FUTURE LOOKS BLEAK
dreary you
handshake no embrace
timid looks
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16 comments:

  1. pia27 May 2009, 13:48:00

    Liked the way the words embraced (sort of pun intended) YOUR FUTURE LOOKS BLEAK

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  2. Thom Gabrukiewicz27 May 2009, 14:15:00

    The dreaded handshake. That makes the future bleak. Like this.

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  3. Sepiru Chris27 May 2009, 14:44:00

    Proper Joe,

    A scalding denunciation.

    I hope you don't know this person.

    Dreary them indeed.

    Chris

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  4. anthonynorth27 May 2009, 15:01:00

    A handshake not to have, me thinks.

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  5. Anonymous27 May 2009, 15:28:00

    big feeling in little words. nice! -Meg

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  6. gautami tripathy27 May 2009, 16:27:00

    Hope you are not talking about you know who!

    :D

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  7. poefusion27 May 2009, 18:46:00

    Definitely not a handshake worth having, I think. Well written. Have a nice day.

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  8. Anonymous27 May 2009, 20:06:00

    sm handshakes r really dreary !!

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  9. Life without Clots27 May 2009, 20:15:00

    nice

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  10. Tumblewords:27 May 2009, 23:03:00

    Or not. Vivid words that create an image of 'so over you'.

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  11. Jeeves28 May 2009, 05:31:00

    Ouch. Future bleak indeed

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  12. PJD28 May 2009, 14:45:00

    I felt sad for "dreary you" after reading the haiku, then laughed out loud with the addition.

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  13. Lucy29 May 2009, 01:06:00

    haha love this!

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  14. lissa29 May 2009, 01:43:00

    the title says it all, I like like "dreary you", I suppose if one's attitude isn't positive, what future will they have?

    thanks for your visit to my blog hope you are enjoying your day

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  15. Lynne29 May 2009, 05:17:00

    Hi Andy,

    Well, I hope when we shake hands it's a firm one, not timid.
    You rose to this poetry challenge well! I like this line a lot: "handshake no embrace"

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  16. when the musics over29 May 2009, 15:15:00

    Downcast, inward, and bleak. I can feel it all, Andy!

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