and posted to The American Sandwich
and The NaiSaiKu Challenge?
The words this week at Three Word Wednesday
are: bicker, nervous, and trajectory.
Here's mine:
THINKS THAT
The impervious biker looks in his directory and thinks that. ‘Forty Second Street and Broadway is no place to hang out, I don’t doubt.’ More ‘nervous bicker’, than ‘the trajectory of a speeding bullet.’
Bicker, shoe licker
the Trajectory street clown
goes down nervous town
UPTOWN GIRL TURNS
DOWNTOWN GUY
Town nervous down goes
Clown street shoe trajectory
Liquor the bicker
Both are fine examples of the offering. But the line, "Uptown girl turns downtown guy" is such a great line.
ReplyDeleteThese were excellent. The Naisaiku was a bit of a tongue-twister to boot.
ReplyDeleteLoved the inverted symmetry in "Uptown Girls"! Nice work, Andy.
ReplyDeletethe Naisaiku was spunky. I like it.
ReplyDeletehappy 3WW!
That naisaiku is catchy!
ReplyDeleteBicker, biker, bicker!
I like the second offering best.
ReplyDeleteloved the american Sandwich !! interesting use of words :)
ReplyDeleteYowsa! Prime time! Love the read...
ReplyDeleteWow!!!1
ReplyDeleteBig fan of the second offering, because of just how well you matched your words to make something that both has rhythm and paints a vivid picture.
ReplyDeleteSO fun to read outloud! Liked it a lot! -Meg
ReplyDeleteall i could think of was what a great skit these both would make... ya know a couple of scenes sorta thing... and the form itself is devine...
ReplyDeleteI'm not really up on the forms you're using but they look fun.
ReplyDeleteI liked the first one :)
ReplyDeleteHappy 3WW
I like these.
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