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Wednesday, May 13, 2009

Three Word Wednesday CXXXVII

Written for and inspired by 3WW
and posted to The American Sandwich
and The NaiSaiKu Challenge?

The words this week at Three Word Wednesday
are: bicker, nervous, and trajectory.

Here's mine:


THINKS THAT

The impervious biker looks in his directory and thinks that. ‘Forty Second Street and Broadway is no place to hang out, I don’t doubt.’ More ‘nervous bicker’, than ‘the trajectory of a speeding bullet.’

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Bicker, shoe licker

the Trajectory street clown

goes down nervous town

UPTOWN GIRL TURNS

DOWNTOWN GUY

Town nervous down goes

Clown street shoe trajectory

Liquor the bicker

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15 comments:

  1. Both are fine examples of the offering. But the line, "Uptown girl turns downtown guy" is such a great line.

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  2. These were excellent. The Naisaiku was a bit of a tongue-twister to boot.

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  3. Loved the inverted symmetry in "Uptown Girls"! Nice work, Andy.

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  4. the Naisaiku was spunky. I like it.
    happy 3WW!

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  5. That naisaiku is catchy!

    Bicker, biker, bicker!

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  6. I like the second offering best.

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  7. loved the american Sandwich !! interesting use of words :)

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  8. Yowsa! Prime time! Love the read...

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  9. Big fan of the second offering, because of just how well you matched your words to make something that both has rhythm and paints a vivid picture.

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  10. SO fun to read outloud! Liked it a lot! -Meg

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  11. all i could think of was what a great skit these both would make... ya know a couple of scenes sorta thing... and the form itself is devine...

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  12. I'm not really up on the forms you're using but they look fun.

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  13. I liked the first one :)
    Happy 3WW

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