This week the prompt at Carry on Tuesday is the
opening lines of A Walk After Dark by W. H. Auden
Here's mine:
THE SMORNING
a
cloudless night
like this can set the
spirit soaring, up up up to
the man in the moon, they call
him loony tuney, he’s pushing up daisies
and we’ll all be joining him soon.
I saw him ‘the smorning’ poking
the ground with a twig.
I said, what are you
smokin’ man?
strokin’ the
deck
like
that?
and
moon dust, it falls before
morning, and I’m hoping
it’ll stick to this ‘ere
honey dipper and
sparkle like gold
to ward off
the cold.
Thanks for the prompt Keith, and I wish you every success in this venture.
ReplyDelete-Andy
beautiful, it is great dream and the structure is wonderful as well
ReplyDeleteI like the poking image. Wish I could do that to the moon and then some...
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changing orbits
This reads good and looks good! Welcome aboard and thanks for you support.
ReplyDeletevery nicely done!
ReplyDeletevery tough to do this...u r a genius!!I've a new poem...pls do c it.
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Love it, what an imaginative poem.
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