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Wednesday, July 08, 2009

Three Word Wednesday CXLV

Written for 3WW
the words this week are:
Gloom, Kneel, and Transparent.

Here's mine:

I kneel in the road, transparent as a squashed frog in the morning gloom.

JUST A GAME
Even though Gloom is just a game, rabid flesh eating mice can still bite. He played another transparent card, hoping that this would be the end. I'll know I've won, when I see her kneel at her wedding, he tells himself.
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Transparent pollen
Gloom smells worse than rotten eggs
kneel down Pokemon
POCKET MONSTER ANIME
Kneel down Pokemon
Gloom smells worse than rotten eggs
transparent pollen
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24 comments:

  1. Great stuff - I don't know how you come up with so much so quickly.

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  2. Great stuff - I don't know how you come up with so much so quickly.

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  3. The thread of gloom wanders enigmatically through all these poetic outbursts! Exciting, dramatic expression!

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  4. Very clever...the first one certainly made its point very visually! :~)

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  5. Sexy, dark and dangerous at times...

    Fun to read.

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  6. Loved these, but the first was an absolute gem.

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  7. These are great. Any mentioning of Pokemon reminds me of when Eric Stuart included a subliminal message: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lQppQcM4kJc

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  8. You can feel the gloom through each. Good stuff.

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  9. Gruesome. Rotten eggs? Ack! Remind me not to play games with you!

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  10. i want to know what happened to the frog?

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  11. I love the gloom smelling like rotten eggs!

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  12. Ick! squashed frog - see that almost everyday... good work

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  13. maybe it's a frog that smells like rotten eggs, but maybe not. How strange - I used pollen as well. Must be something in the air! :)
    Fun read!

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  14. well you are just amazing every time !! Pokemon reminded me of watching the cartoon with my brother daily !!

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  15. Very nice one...Really like the first one.

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  16. haha..oh, my!

    fantastic! and squashed frogs--transparently delicious.

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  17. These are all amusing. I love the game one (kneel at the wedding).

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  18. I liked the first poem because of how you used the words to create a more visual image.

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  19. the single sentence was the best! straight and to the point! :)

    the naisaku was good too...

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  20. and I must tell you--I've given you an award over at my blog. Do come see:

    http://therer2doors.wordpress.com/2009/07/11/i-really-want-to-be-the-queen/

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  21. These are amazing. Your imagery and descriptions are so animated and dynamic. Wonderful!

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