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Tuesday, May 18, 2010

Tuesday Challenge??? Phew!!!!

A couple of challenges for you today.
and The American Sandwich game..

Here's my NaiSaiKu:
Man mountain
Triangulation
Pentagon
EQUIANGULAR
Pentagon
Triangulation
Mountain man

The prompt sentence at The American Sandwich game.. is:
Dawn needs to win the lottery before Dave sees the credit card bill.

HERE'S MINE:  
Poetic Flash Fiction in 51 Syllables.

Write a piece of flash fiction in just three American Sentences.
Allen Ginsberg's American Sentence has seventeen syllables.

Your task is to use as few words as possible to fill the sandwich.

CREDIT CRUNCH
Each morning she waits for the postman and hides the letters unopened. Dawn needs to win the lottery before Dave sees the credit card bill. If she doesn't find some money soon, Dave will take her pet robot back.
18052+10/1
What will you write?

2 comments:

  1. Dave and Dawn have some serious communication issues.

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  2. LOL..Poor robot...
    Mine is here
    hugs
    shakira

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