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Tuesday, June 09, 2009

Monday Poetry Train Revisited

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Monday Poetry Train Revisited



blue lady

blue lamp

blue light

blue cloud

blue moon

blue night

blue shoes

blue nose

blue toes

blue you

blue me

blue who

blue baby

blue blood

blue plight

blue cheese

blue coffee

blue wine

blue movie

blue book

blue mood

blue money

blue face

blue rinse

blue suit

blue shirt

blue tie

blue berry

blue fruit

blue phew!

Don't forget the Tuesday Challenge? and The American Sandwich game..


  1. as delightful as always.
    "blue you
    blue me
    blue who"

  2. Wow. This is a very blue piece! And thanks for your comments over at my blog :)

  3. Are you feeling blue today? :-)
    Enjoyed this.

  4. blue
    and blue
    more blue
    totally blewed!

  5. wow! this is cool. it reminded me of a poem i wrote two years ago:


    are you beauty
    or sorrow?
    do you represent tranquility
    or anxiety?

    why is blue surrender?
    why is blue holler?

    freedom then shackles
    dream then shattered hope

    i want to run to the blue
    i want to run away from you blue

    who are you and why are you
    remembered and healing?
    despised and hurting?

    blue that elevates, please
    if i could choose just one part of you