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Tuesday, June 30, 2009

Flounders!

Written for and posted to The NaiSaiKu Challenge?
Have you tried it yet?

Slippery fish
flounders on the floor
SQUIRTING BLOOD
and the floor found her
fishy slip
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5 comments:

  1. Janet Jarrell30 Jun 2009, 13:59:00

    Perfectly messy. Very fun post!

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  2. Thom Gabrukiewicz1 Jul 2009, 00:16:00

    I have had this happen to me, lots. Great stuff.

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  3. shraddha2 Jul 2009, 16:19:00

    nicely told...


    naisaiku is new concept to me!

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  4. anthonynorth7 Jul 2009, 10:31:00

    A fishy, messy but enjoyable Naisaiku.
    It is often inevitable.

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  5. Megha10 Jul 2009, 16:33:00

    Fishing and slipping :)
    Nice poem.

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